September 20th, 2014, 11:00 am

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September 20th, 2014, 11:11 pm

Xerxe's purpose being to cause a huge mess for noble reasons?

September 20th, 2014, 11:14 pm

@NitztheBloody Xerxes wants to fix said problems and do something new that would make them worthy of the title 'hero'. [I struggled with the dialogue in this page, to say the least...]

September 20th, 2014, 11:18 pm

It's written fine and sounds appropriate for him, by which I mean it sounds appropriate for an affable dimwit who seeks glory more than he seeks justice :)

September 21st, 2014, 12:53 pm

@NitztheBloody hmm. I didn't know he came off that dumb. I'll revise the dialogue when I think of something better.

September 21st, 2014, 6:34 pm

Mordecai, as usual, you summed it all up perfectly.

September 22nd, 2014, 12:17 am

Xerxes strikes me as the type who, if he wasn't living in a fantasy world, would spend hours practicing sweet moves in front of the mirror and wishing he'd some day get the chance to use them.

September 23rd, 2014, 1:49 pm

I don't see Xerxes as stupid, just a woefully naive romantic with stars in his eyes from reading too many adventure stories.

September 24th, 2014, 11:00 pm

@AeroZero I might just be too cynical. The "Besides, It'll be our chance to become heroes" comment does sound like he's more interested in the glory than the duty. Then again, it suits the character, because for all his good intentions he's still very green and hasn't experienced the worst the battlefield has to offer.

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