January 4th, 2014, 1:00 pm

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January 4th, 2014, 4:53 pm

None of them have follow-up questions for Violene? That's sure to come back to haunt them later.

January 4th, 2014, 5:09 pm

@melaredblu Whoops! Plot Inconsistency. Gotta change the dialogue, look at this page again in like an hour. Thanks for spotting that!
Sometimes when you're really close to your work it makes sense no matter what it says.

January 4th, 2014, 5:23 pm

There we go. Much better.

January 4th, 2014, 5:25 pm

That makes a lot more sense. The only thing is, if you get the chance, you might make Vael's expression a little more serious to match his words, but that's just a minor detail.

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